Luis Ernesto Romero
Luis Romero era un pandillero en El Salvador cuando era joven. Dice Primero que es muy difícil para que los pandilleros de el Salvador que vivan hasta los 22 años. En El Salvador hay 12,000 diferente miembros de pandillas. Lo que le salvo a Romero fue cuando nació su hija y tuvo que tomar responsabilidad. De ahí el creo un programa para todos esos pandilleros que quieren cambiar sus vidas. En el salvador se discrimine los tatuajes porque no tienen trabajo y son vagabundos. Entonces este programa que Luis Romero creo les ayuda a los pandilleros tener un trabajo. 5,000 pandilleros en el salvador han ido a lugares de rehabilitación de drogas o alcohol y 1,250 de los pandilleros han sido ayudados con este programa.
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Writing Rubric: Self-Assessment
Name:
karen
Date:
Assignment:
Before writing, I think of what I know about the topic. I make a list of ideas, words, and phrases I might use.
yes
I organize my thoughts and ideas so that I can focus on one central idea.
yes
I choose ideas and examples that are appropriate for this culture.
yes
I make sure the writing has a definite beginning, middle, and end.
yes
I try to make my writing interesting.
yes
I write a first draft and then I reread and revise.
no
I check to make sure that my writing makes sense.
yes
I make sure the sentences relate to each other.
yes
I use familiar language structures so I know I am writing correctly.
yes
If I do not know a word, I use a word or phrase I do know.
yes
I make sure punctuation is correct according to the rules in this language.
yes
I check my spelling.
yes
I check my use of verb tenses (present, past, future, etc.).
yes
I check my use of gender and agreements (masculine, feminine, neuter).
yes
I ask someone who knows the language (classmate) to read my writing and give me feedback.
yes
I make sure the final copy is legible (handwritten or typed).
yes
What I think I did very well on in this assignment:
on informing on the topic
What I think I need to focus/improve on next time:
i dont know
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Writing Rubric: Peer-Assessment
Student Writer:
Karen
Student Reviewer:
Christine
Assignment:
Formal Writing #1
Date:
10/11/2007
The assignment is legible (written neatly or typed).
5
The central theme of the writing is clear.
5
The writing has a definite beginning, middle, and end.
5
The assignment is interesting to read.
5
There are enough details and examples to make the ideas understandable.
5
The sentences relate to each other.
5
The ideas are appropriate for the culture.
5
The sentence structures are overall correct and understandable.
5
The writer uses punctuation correctly.
5
The writer has checked spelling so that spelling is overall correct.
5
The writer uses verb tenses correctly.
5
The writer uses correct subject/verb agreements.
5
The writer uses gender agreements correctly.
5
What I really liked about this assignment:
I liked how you mentioned the lifespan of a gang member. It was really interesting.
Formal Writing #1-
Your writing is very good and it shows you have great control of the
language. It is very clear and you used appropriate vocabulary and
grammar. There were a few errors but it didn’t impede the
comprehension. Category Score= High
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