Tuesday, October 9, 2007
Informal Writing #2
Hola señora Pérez le quería darle las gracias por haber conseguirme una entrevista con la compañía de Teen Vogue. Cuando fui a la inserviste la semana pasada estaba muy nerviosa. No sabía en lo que me estaba metiendo. Cuando entre, toda la gente era muy amable. Después de esperar por unos momentos me llamo la directora y me pregunto unas preguntas y me dijo que me iba llamar pronto para avisarme se había garrado el puesto. ¡Si me dan el puesto voy hacer la mujer mas feliz del mundo! Voy a trabajar como una asistente de una diseñadora de ropa. Estoy muy alegre.
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Name:
karen
Date:
Assignment:
Before writing, I think of what I know about the topic. I make a list of ideas, words, and phrases I might use.
yes
I organize my thoughts and ideas so that I can focus on one central idea.
yes
I choose ideas and examples that are appropriate for this culture.
yes
I make sure the writing has a definite beginning, middle, and end.
yes
I try to make my writing interesting.
yes
I write a first draft and then I reread and revise.
no
I check to make sure that my writing makes sense.
yes
I make sure the sentences relate to each other.
yes
I use familiar language structures so I know I am writing correctly.
yes
If I do not know a word, I use a word or phrase I do know.
yes
I make sure punctuation is correct according to the rules in this language.
yes
I check my spelling.
yes
I check my use of verb tenses (present, past, future, etc.).
yes
I check my use of gender and agreements (masculine, feminine, neuter).
yes
I ask someone who knows the language (classmate) to read my writing and give me feedback.
yes
I make sure the final copy is legible (handwritten or typed).
yes
What I think I did very well on in this assignment:
having a good conversation with the person i was writing to
What I think I need to focus/improve on next time:
i dont know
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Writing Rubric: Peer-Assessment
Student Writer:
Karen
Student Reviewer:
Christine
Assignment:
Informal Writing #2
Date:
10/10/2007
The assignment is legible (written neatly or typed).
5
The central theme of the writing is clear.
5
The writing has a definite beginning, middle, and end.
5
The assignment is interesting to read.
5
There are enough details and examples to make the ideas understandable.
5
The sentences relate to each other.
5
The ideas are appropriate for the culture.
5
The sentence structures are overall correct and understandable.
5
The writer uses punctuation correctly.
5
The writer has checked spelling so that spelling is overall correct.
5
The writer uses verb tenses correctly.
5
The writer uses correct subject/verb agreements.
5
The writer uses gender agreements correctly.
5
What I really liked about this assignment:
I liked how you talked about the job that you want in the future. You seemed very interested in fashion design.
I have the following questions about your assignment:
No tengo preguntas.
Some suggestions for next time:
No tengo consejos.
Writing Rubric: Peer-Assessment
Student Writer:
Karen
Student Reviewer:
Laura
Assignment:
Informal Writing 2
Date:
101407
The assignment is legible (written neatly or typed).
5
The central theme of the writing is clear.
5
The writing has a definite beginning, middle, and end.
5
The assignment is interesting to read.
5
There are enough details and examples to make the ideas understandable.
5
The sentences relate to each other.
5
The ideas are appropriate for the culture.
5
The sentence structures are overall correct and understandable.
5
The writer uses punctuation correctly.
5
The writer has checked spelling so that spelling is overall correct.
5
The writer uses verb tenses correctly.
5
The writer uses correct subject/verb agreements.
5
The writer uses gender agreements correctly.
5
What I really liked about this assignment:
It's almost like you can speak spanish fluently. hahaha. YOU ROCKED IT OUT, baby.
I have the following questions about your assignment:
none, you did great.
Some suggestions for next time:
keep it P.I :)
Reviewer: My mom, Celina
Creo que Karen eso bien en lo que escribio y no tenia muchos errores de gramatica
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