Tuesday, October 9, 2007

informal writing #3


Hola profesor ¿como haz estado? Espero que todo este bien. Bueno, mi viaje estaba muy largo y cansado. La llegada estaba muy tranquila, recibí todas mis cosas y no perdí nada. La familia que me voy a quedar con son muy amable y tranquilos. Tienen una casa muy grande que tiene una alberca. Los cursos que voy a tomar van hacer para aprendizaje de culturas. Los excursiones que voy hacer es ir a Centro América y visitar a todos los países.

4 comments:

Krrrn said...

Writing Rubric: Self-Assessment
Name:
karen
Date:

Assignment:

Before writing, I think of what I know about the topic. I make a list of ideas, words, and phrases I might use.
yes

I organize my thoughts and ideas so that I can focus on one central idea.
yes

I choose ideas and examples that are appropriate for this culture.
yes

I make sure the writing has a definite beginning, middle, and end.
yes

I try to make my writing interesting.
yes

I write a first draft and then I reread and revise.
no

I check to make sure that my writing makes sense.
yes

I make sure the sentences relate to each other.
yes

I use familiar language structures so I know I am writing correctly.
yes

If I do not know a word, I use a word or phrase I do know.
yes

I make sure punctuation is correct according to the rules in this language.
yes

I check my spelling.
yes

I check my use of verb tenses (present, past, future, etc.).
yes

I check my use of gender and agreements (masculine, feminine, neuter).
yes

I ask someone who knows the language (classmate) to read my writing and give me feedback.
yes

I make sure the final copy is legible (handwritten or typed).
yes


What I think I did very well on in this assignment:
on informing on the topic

What I think I need to focus/improve on next time:
i dont know


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Krrrn said...

Writing Rubric: Self-Assessment
Name:
karen
Date:

Assignment:

Before writing, I think of what I know about the topic. I make a list of ideas, words, and phrases I might use.
yes

I organize my thoughts and ideas so that I can focus on one central idea.
yes

I choose ideas and examples that are appropriate for this culture.
yes

I make sure the writing has a definite beginning, middle, and end.
yes

I try to make my writing interesting.
yes

I write a first draft and then I reread and revise.
no

I check to make sure that my writing makes sense.
yes

I make sure the sentences relate to each other.
yes

I use familiar language structures so I know I am writing correctly.
yes

If I do not know a word, I use a word or phrase I do know.
yes

I make sure punctuation is correct according to the rules in this language.
yes

I check my spelling.
yes

I check my use of verb tenses (present, past, future, etc.).
yes

I check my use of gender and agreements (masculine, feminine, neuter).
yes

I ask someone who knows the language (classmate) to read my writing and give me feedback.
yes

I make sure the final copy is legible (handwritten or typed).
yes


What I think I did very well on in this assignment:
i think i wrote well

What I think I need to focus/improve on next time:
i dont know


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KyraMadison said...

Writing Rubric: Peer-Assessment
Student Writer:
Karen
Student Reviewer:
Christine
Assignment:
Informal Writing #3
Date:
10/11/2007
The assignment is legible (written neatly or typed).
5

The central theme of the writing is clear.
5

The assignment is interesting to read.
5

There are enough details and examples to make the ideas understandable.
5

The sentences relate to each other.
5

The ideas are appropriate for the culture.
5

The sentence structures are overall correct and understandable.
5

The writer uses punctuation correctly.
5

The writer has checked spelling so that spelling is overall correct.
5

The writer uses correct subject/verb agreements.
5

The writer uses gender agreements correctly.
5

What I really liked about this assignment:
I liked how you asked the professor how they have been.

I have the following questions about your assignment:
What is your family like?

Some suggestions for next time:
You can expand a little from the topic to talk about your new family or future plans of activities.

Krrrn said...

Reviewer: My mom, Celina

Creo que la conversacion parece muy real y esta bien escrito