La primera lectura y Fuente 2 son similares porque los dos temas se tratan de la violencia. Los dos temas hablan de cómo la violencia en Colombia ha sido muy larga y muy antiguos. Colombia ha estado en conflicto por 40 anos (Fuente 2). La gente de Colombia sabe muy bien que hay violencia alrededor de ellos, aunque no lo han aceptado. Por eso las mujeres en Colombia no muestran rencor cuando han perdido sus hijos por la violencia (Fuente 1). En las calles de Colombia poco se habla de paz. Gente no sabe de el día internacional de la paz, pero si se celebra. El día internacional de la paz cae el 21 de septiembre, y es un día para reflexionar la paz. Los dos temas hablan de que hay esperanza para paz, aunque mucha gente cree que no vendrá, y que muy pronto llegara. Pero se tiene que ser algo, y no vendrá por noche o de día, va tomar mucho tiempo y esfuerzo.
Writing Rubric: Self-AssessmentName: karenDate: sept 14 2007Assignment: Before writing, I think of what I know about the topic. I make a list of ideas, words, and phrases I might use.yes I organize my thoughts and ideas so that I can focus on one central idea.yes I choose ideas and examples that are appropriate for this culture.yes I make sure the writing has a definite beginning, middle, and end.yes I try to make my writing interesting.yes I write a first draft and then I reread and revise.yes I check to make sure that my writing makes sense.yes I make sure the sentences relate to each other.yes I use familiar language structures so I know I am writing correctly.yes If I do not know a word, I use a word or phrase I do know.no I make sure punctuation is correct according to the rules in this language.yes I check my spelling.yes I check my use of verb tenses (present, past, future, etc.).yes I check my use of gender and agreements (masculine, feminine, neuter).no I ask someone who knows the language (classmate) to read my writing and give me feedback.yes I make sure the final copy is legible (handwritten or typed).yes
What I think I did very well on in this assignment:comparing and using details
What I think I need to focus/improve on next time:more writing
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Writing Rubric: Peer-Assessment
Student Writer:
Karen
Student Reviewer:
Christine
Assignment:
Formal Writing #2
Date:
10/12/2007
The assignment is legible (written neatly or typed).
5
The central theme of the writing is clear.
5
The writing has a definite beginning, middle, and end.
5
The assignment is interesting to read.
5
There are enough details and examples to make the ideas understandable.
5
The sentences relate to each other.
5
The ideas are appropriate for the culture.
5
The sentence structures are overall correct and understandable.
5
The writer uses punctuation correctly.
5
The writer has checked spelling so that spelling is overall correct.
5
The writer uses verb tenses correctly.
5
The writer uses correct subject/verb agreements.
5
The writer uses gender agreements correctly.
5
What I really liked about this assignment:
I liked how you talk about the International day of peace.
I have the following questions about your assignment:
Some suggestions for next time:
Check to make sure that you use del instead of de el.
Reviewer: My mom, Celina
Karen comparo muy bien los dos articulos que habla sobre la violencia, y recibi mucha informacion.
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